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$B9-@%(B  $B>;0l(B (Hirose Shouichi)          shou@kt.rim.or.jp


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--- commercial.sgml	1997/10/04 05:37:08	1.1
+++ commercial.sgml	1997/10/04 06:05:13	1.2
@@ -15,14 +15,13 @@
 $B0z$-$D$1$F$$$^$9(B. $B$?$/$5$s$N%f!<%6$r>R2p$7$F$$$k(B
 <a href="&base/gallery.html">$B%.%c%i%j!<(B</a>$B%Z!<%8$K2C$($F(B,
 $B$3$3$G$O(BFreeBSD$B$N$?$a$K>&MQ$N%5!<%S%9$rDs6!$7$F$$$k%Y%s%@$r(B
-$B8+$D$1$k$3$H$K$J$k$G$7$g$&(B.</p>
+$B8+$D$1$k$3$H$,$G$-$k$G$7$g$&(B.</p>
 
-<p>$BJXMx$N$?$a$K(B, $B$@$s$@$sBg$-$/$J$C$F$$$k%j%9%H$r$$$/$D$+$KJ,3d$7$^$7$?(B.
+<p>$B%j%9%H$,$@$s$@$sBg$-$/$J$C$F$$$k$N$G(B, $BJXMx$N$?$a$K$$$/$D$+$KJ,3d$7$^$7$?(B.
 $B$3$N%Z!<%8$K2C$($k$Y$-(BFreeBSD$B$r%5%]!<%H$7$F$$$k$[$+$N2q<R$rCN$C$F$$$k$H$-$K$O(B,
 $B$<$R(B<a href="mailto:www@freebsd.org">$B$o$?$7$?$A$K(B</a>$B65$($F$/$@$5$$(B.</p>
 
-<p>$B$o$?$7$?$A$N%j%9%H$O(B, $B$=$l$K4^$^$l$F$$$k%Y%s%@$N@=IJ$d%5!<%S%9$X$NJ]>Z$r(B
-$B$7$F$$$k$b$N$G$O$"$j$^$;$s(B.</p>
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 <li><a href="&base/commercial/consulting.html">$BAjCL$9$k$?$a$N%5!<%S%9(B</a>
-$BC1$K(BFreeBSD$B$r;O$a$F$_$k(B, 
+$B$?$@(BFreeBSD$B$r;O$a$F$_$k(B, 
 $B$b$7$/$OBg$-$J%W%m%8%'%/%H$r40@.$5$;$k$?$a$KI,MW$G$"$k(B, 
 $B$=$N$I$A$i$K$7$F$b$3$3$GEz$($rF@$k$3$H$,$G$-$k$G$7$g$&(B.
 <p></p></li>
 
 <li><a href="&base/commercial/misc.html">$B$=$NB>$N;(B?$J%5!<%S%9(B</a>
-$BK\$d>~$j(B, $B$3$l$i$,$J$/$F$O@8$-$F$$$1$^$;$s(B!
+$BK\$d%"%/%;%5%j(B, $B$3$l$i$,$J$/$F$O@8$-$F$$$1$^$;$s(B!
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